Selasa, 23 Oktober 2012

Reflection VI


To be honest I feel that writing is not easy. I tried to learn how to write well but I cannot practice it well. In one time, I felt that I am not clever. I did many mistakes when I wrote some paragraphs. I did so many grammatical mistakes even if I try to learn about grammar many times.
Huft…… Grammar….. Grammar…… and Grammmar…..
I almost stopped to learn about you (grammar) but I do not have any idea what will happen learning English without learning grammar. At last, someone inspire me.
“I have to be strong even if I am weak”
 “I have to keep studying even if I feel bored”
“I have to keep struggling since I do not know what will happen next”
I will be strong, keep studying and keep struggling because I want not be loser.  
Thanks my friend and brother
               

Reflection V


Last week we got three times for writing I course and I got some new knowledge. The discussion well done with no much debated like Zakiy’s paragraph is process analysis, Lilis’s paragraph is process analysis and exposition, than Tryas’s paragraph is explanatory. Even if at the first time Tryas believe that her paragraph is persuasive but at last she agrees that her paragraph is explanatory. Discussion is a good way to reconstruct our understanding.

Minggu, 30 September 2012

Reflection IV



Reflection is an important aspect in learning process, by this way our teacher know how far our understanding about our material that we learn or study. Beside that we can share our understanding or our knowledge to our friends.
In this week in Writing 1 course I got some new knowledge such us:
-          Topic sentence should be a sentence (a whole of sentence) it is usually taken at sentence of a paragraph but in special case it is located in the middle or bottom.
-          Topic it must be a word or a phrase.
-          News (essay) commonly just informing and the kind of the paragraph cannot be identified or classified.
At last we have to share what we knew and what we did not know to our friends, we can discuss in small groups or ask it personality this way will increase our knowledge about materials that we learn. That’s all about my reflection, at least it will help you that is my hope.     

Reflection IV



Reflection is an important aspect in learning process, by this way our teacher know how far our understanding about our material that we learn or study. Beside that we can share our understanding or our knowledge to our friends.
In this week in Writing 1 course I got some new knowledge such us:
-          Topic sentence should be a sentence (a whole of sentence) it is usually taken at sentence of a paragraph but in special case it is located in the middle or bottom.
-          Topic it must be a word or a phrase.
-          News (essay) commonly just informing and the kind of the paragraph cannot be identified or classified.
At last we have to share what we knew and what we did not know to our friends, we can discuss in small groups or ask it personality this way will increase our knowledge about materials that we learn. That’s all about my reflection, at least it will help you that is my hope.     

Minggu, 23 September 2012

The Next Reflection



Writing I course is a good class for me.  I can share and discuss very well with my friends. I get so much new knowledge in this class. In discussion section I discus with Aris about our description paragraph I learn so much things from it, I learn that if we want to translate our text it is better if we translate by ourselves and bettor not to use google translate. Than in presentation section 1 on Friday I must leaved the class earlier because of my family’s business but I still can learn about paragraphs:
-           A comparison paragraph is compare about similarities.
-          A contra paragraph is compare about differentiates. 
-          Argumentative paragraph, if we want to make a good argumentative paragraph we must add an opposite argument from our argument and we must show our position as a writer in a clear position.
-          Definition paragraph, definition paragraph is only refer to one word or phrase and we may not use our opinion.

Sabtu, 15 September 2012

Reflection

Last week I got a lot of new knowledge about Paragraph:
- In discussion section I can share my knowledge about paragraph with Hamdhy Rois. We can transfer our knowledge well.
- than in the next meeting (presentation) I also get much knowledge about paragraph.
- It is good if we can find a good paragraph that have a clear topic sentence and a clear purpose so we can analyze that paragraph easyly.
- Topic sentence is not also the whole of the first part of paragraph but topic sentence must be a whole of sentence.
- Sometime topic sentence is not written in the paragraph.
- Process analysis paragraph will be better if we write in a whole paragraph or there is no parth or paragraph is separated.

Sabtu, 08 September 2012

Reflection


There are so much things about paragraph that I got from my writing I course on Tuesday 07th  September 2012:
-          Paragraph always connect or coherent one each other in an essay. I mean that if an essay contain of three paragraphs the first paragraph will coherent with the second paragraph and also the third, so you need to be careful to take which one will you choose to be analyzed.
-          To analyze a paragraph we must give attention the topic sentence, because it is describing the whole of paragraph.
-          Than we have to know the purpose of the paragraph. Sometimes the structure or the shape of a paragraph like Narration but the purpose is classified. So we can not say that is a narration paragraph, the right one is that is a classification paragraph.
-          We have to read our paragraph more than one time so know it clearly and we can analyze easily.
-           Than discus your opinion about a paragraph with your friends is a great idea to find the final conclusion, because you can analyze and also you can share it together.

Selasa, 04 September 2012

PARAGRAPH


             
           “Paragraph”, this word is not strange for us, since we have learned it from elementary school. When I read some materials or files about paragraph in English from Miss Vita, I think I will get a lot of different knowledge about paragraph in English and in Indonesian. Than after I read those materials. I sure myself that I will get some different knowledge about paragraph, but I will also get some same knowledge about it.
            A paragraph must have a topic or main idea and every sentence in a paragraph must suport that main idea. When I was in senior high school my teacher also give a file about paragraph to me, there are many kind of paragraph. there are:

RECOUNT
Social function : To retell events for the purpose of informing or entertaining.
Generic structure
1. Orientation : provides the setting and introduces participants.
2. Events : tell what happened, in what sequence
3. Re-orientation : optional – closure of events.
Going to Sanur Beach
Orientation Last holiday our family went to Bali to have a picnic. We went there by plane. We were in Bali for six days, so we had to stay in a hotel because we didn’t have any relatives there. We stayed in Bali Beach Hotel near Sanur Beach.
Event 1 When we came to the hotel, we didn’t come to our room directly, but we have to check in first. We were received by the receptionists who were friendly and kind, and then we were helped by a room boy who took us to our rooms.
Event 2 On the second day we visited Sanur Beach. We just took a walk, because the beach is in front of the hotel. We walked along the seashore, played water and sand. Actually we also wanted to swim in the beach but the lifeguard didn’t allow us.
Event 3 Besides doing many activities we also watched some foreign tourists activities. Some tourists were lying on the beach, while others were having message or surfing.
Re-Orientation When we felt tired, we took a rest to have some meals and drinks. And at 2 p.m. we went to the hotel. It was tiring but we were happy.
Adapted from: English exercise book for Junior High School

REPORT
Social function : To describe the way things are, with reference to a range of natural, man made and social phenomena in our environment.
Generic structure:
1. General classification : tell what the phenomena under discussion it.
2. Description : tell what the phenomenon under discussion is like in terms of (1), parts (2), qualities (3), habits or behaviors if living, uses, if non natural.
General classification A post office has an important role in the modern century. Though there are a lot of means of communications such as telephones, facsimiles, handphones and computers, the post office is still needed by people for the cheap public service. The clerks and the postmen are always busy serving the people.
Description of function The post office sends and receives various kinds of letters, such as post cards, aerograms, cables, postal order, surface mails, airmails, registered letters, besides, it provides also stamps, revenue stamps, envelopes, etc. We can also pay the electric bill the installment of the house in the house or save money inthe post office.
Description of Before Lebaran day a lot of people in the big cities return home to their owns. They bring a lot of luggage and money.The post office will help them send their luggage and their money to their home towns. When the arrive a their home towns, they can take their luggage and their money directly by showing the receipts. So, they can go back to their home towns, they can take their luggage and their money directly by showing the receipts. So, they can go back to their home towns safer and feel more comfortable.
Adapted from: English exercise book for Junior High School

DISCUSSION
Social function : To present (at least) two points of view about an issue.
Generic structure:
1. Issue: statements, preview
2. Arguments for and against or statement of differing points of view :point, elaboration.
3. Conclusion or recommendation.
Do women Deserve Higher Education
Issue The issue we are discussing is whether women need higher education or not. Some people think that there is no use for women to get higher education, surrounding. Thus, knowing about practical household management is sufficient for women to lead their lives
Argument against Moreover, higher education does not ensure women get better life, so why bother about it? There are many examples of women who succed in their lives though they enjoy only average education. They succeed in managing their household, educating their children and participating in community activities.
Argument for On the other hand, some other people believe that women also have rights to pursue higher education. They claim that education is important for everyone, including women, because it is one way to improve the quality of life. Therefore, every woman must get education as high as they can pursue.
A further point they make is that higher education is not just the matter of achieving a better position in community or working sphere. More importantly, it is the way to empower women and to give them better understanding of life and universe.
Conclusion In summary, women have the same right as men’s to get higher education. However, it is also their right to take the chance or just to leave it.
Adapted from: An English Text Book for Senior High School

ANECDOTE
Social function : To share with others an account of an unusual or amusing incident.
Generic structure:
1. Abstract : signals the retelling of an unusual incident
2. Orientation : set the scene
3. Crisis : provide details of the unusual incident
4. Reaction : reaction to crisis
5. Coda : optional reflection on or evaluation of the incident.
Where is My Sixth Donkey?
Abstract One sunny morning, Nasredin went to the market and brought six donkeys with him. He wanted to sell them. Nasredin felt tired so he rode one of the donkeys.
Orientation A moment later he wanted to make sure that he had not lost any of the donkeys. Sitting on the back of his donkey. Nasredin counted his donkeys but skipping the one he was riding on. So, he was confused because there were only five donkeys left, while he brought six donkeys from his house.
Crisis He got down from his donkey and started to count again. He was very glad then because there were six donkeys. He rode one of the again. Five minutes later he started counting the donkeys again. And he was confused again because he had only five donkeys.
Reaction Coincidentally one of his friends came by and asked him, “Why do you look very confused, Nasreddin?”. Nasreddin answered, “Yes, I’m very confused. This morning I left my house with six donkeys. Then I got down from my donkey and I counted again and there were six donkeys. I was wondering but I was glad because my lost donkey was back. Then I rode one of them again. Now, I count them again and there are only five donkeys left.
Coda His friend said, there are six donkeys here. No, there are only five. Let met count again, one, two, three, four, five. There are only five!” Nasreddin answered.
Yes, you just counted five donkeys, and you are riding on the other one and you didn’t count it. So, there are six donkeys, his friend explained.
Adapted from: Informational English for Senior High School

NARRATIVE
Social function : To amuse, entertain and to deal with actual or vicarious experience in different ways. Narrative deal with problematic events which lead to a crisis or turning point of some kind, which in turn finds a resolution.
Generic structure
1. Orientation : sets the scene and introduces the participants.
2. Evaluation : a stepping back to evaluate the flight
3. Complication : a crisis arises
4. Resolution : the crisis is resolved, for better or for worse
5. Re-orientation : optional
Orientation Margaret Dale is twenty four and a nanny. She is the daughter of a well known surgeon. When she was young, Margaret and her sister, Barbara, had a nanny. She dressed them and took them to school in the morning. She prepared their breakfast and their lunch box, to take to school. She met them after school and took them home. After tea, she used to read to them in bed. On Barbara’s birthday she organized a fantastic party. It was then Margaret decided that she too would be a nanny.
Complication Her farther was furious when she wanted to become a nanny. Like most parents he wanted Margaret to go to university and hold a good position in society.
Resolution But Margaret decided to go to college after leaving secondary school. There she studied all the subjects necessary to look after children. She got her certificate and she has been working for four years as a nanny. The main thing is she is enjoying herself. She gets a lot of personal satisfaction in her job. And her father sees a young, happy girl with a lot of enthusiasm for life.
Adapted from: Informational English for Senior High School

REVIEW
Social function : To critique an art work, event for a public audience. Such work of art include movies, TV shows, book, plays, operas recordings, exhibitions, concerts and ballets.
Generic structure
1. Orientation : place the work in its general and particular context, often by comparing it with others of its kind or through analogue with a non art object or event.
2. Interpretive Recount : summaries the plot and / or provides account of how the reviewed rendition of the work came into being : is optional, but if present often recursive.
3. Evaluation : provides an evaluation of the work and / or its performance or production is usually recursive
4. Evaluative : summation provides a kind of punch line which sums up the reviewers opinion of the art event as a whole is optional.
What’s up with love?
Orientation Ada Apa Dengan Cinta ? (What’s up with love?) is a 2002’s big hit in Indonesia. Many viewers watched it again and over again (especially the teenager audience).
Interpretive recount It’s no surprise considering that the movie’s theme offers something that closely related to lives. But, it’s not all about it. There are a lot of sociological concepts framed in the plot. It gives the audiences something to take home about. Being juvenile is not always being part of the peer group. Follow your own heart is much better step to take.
Evaluation The direction made this movie with trying as much as possible to avoid the clich that a teen it makes this movie as a positive one for the teenagers. Much better than a teen movie used to be (hedonism, lack of originality, vulgarism, etc). The cast is great. Each actor plays their part decently and makes the plot’s development in much style. Dian Sastro Wardoyo does know how to act in front of the camera and she indeed the next best thing in Indonesia.
Evaluative Technically, this movie is a mediocre. The face is a bit slow, but in general, “Ada Apa Dengan Cinta ?” is a respectable movie.
Adapted from: An English Text book for Senior High School 

DESCRIPTION
Social function : To describe a particular person, place or thing.
Generic structure
1. Identification : Identifies phenomenon to be described.
2. Description : Describes parts, qualities, characteristics.
Sriwedari Park
Identification Sriwedari is a famous place in the centre of Solo. It is situated on Jalan Slamet Riyadi, close to the tourist information centre.
Description of qualities Sriwedari Park is best known for it’s performance of Wayang orang. In the middle of the park, there is a traditional theatre for performing wayang orang. Wayang orang is one of the traditional cultures from Central Java. It is a kind of wayang kulit but it is performed by people. The visitors can enjoy the show on Saturday night or an certain occasions like festivals, Maleman, etc.
Description of parts The park also features a number of recreation facilities, cinemas, children playground, dangdut stage and a museum. People will take their children to lay in the play gound on Saturday night and on Sunday morning. The car also watch film in Solo theatre everyday. For dangdut lovers they can enjoy the songs and dances on Saturday night. 

EXPLANATION
Social function : To explain the processes involved in the formation or workings of natural or socio cultural phenomena.
Generic structure
1. A general statement: Position the reader.
2. A sequenced explanation of why or how something occurs.
General statement Speech production is made possible by the specialized movement of our vocal organ that generate speech sound waves.
A sequenced explanation Like all sound production require a source of energy. The source of energy for speech production is the steady stream of air that comes from the lungs as we exhale. When we breathe normally, the air stream is inaudible. To become audible, the air stream must vibrate rapidly. The vocal cords cause the air stream to vibrate.
As we talk, the vocal cords open and lose rapidly, chops up the steady air stream in to a series of puffs. These puffs are heard as a buzz. But this buzz is still not a speech.
To produce speech sound, the vocal tract must change shape. During speech we continually alter the shape of the vocal tract by moving the tongue and lips, etc. These movements change the acoustic properties of the vocal tract, which in turn produce the different sounds of speech.
Adapted from: An English Text book for Senior High School 

ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION
Social function : To persuade the reader or listener that something is the case.
Generic structure
1. Thesis : position, introduces topic and indicates writers position preview outlines the main arguments to be presented
2. Arguments : point retates main arguments outlined in preview elaboration develops and supports each point / arguments.
3. Reiteration : restates writer’s position (Conclusion)
Thesis The facsimile machine has changed communication completely. It is usually called the fax machine. People nowadays do not send telegrams. They send a fax.
Arguments 1 It is faster and you can send it from your own home or from a “wartel”. You can use it to send messages and pictures.
Arguments 2 A fax machine has many functions. It can be used to send and receive documents. It can also be used as a document is very simple. You place the document you want to send, face down in to the feeder. Dial the number and press “start”. Dialing a number is similar to dialing a phone.
Argument 3 An additional function of the machine is the “one-touch” dialing. You can store you frequently used numbers giving each number an abbreviated code. For example, you give the code 1 for your friend’s number. Then you give numbers 2, 3 to other numbers. The next time you press 1 the machine will dial your friend’s number.
Argument 4 The fax machine is a very useful tool for businesses and newspaper journalists. They can use a fax machine to send or receive their documents quickly and easily. They can also send pictures or drawings using a fax machine.
Reiteration It has become one of the frequently used communication systems in global communication.
Adapted from: Informational English for Senior High School

HORTATORY EXPOSITION
Social function : To persuade the reader or listener that something should or should not be the case.
Generic structure
1. Thesis: announcement of issue concern.
2. Argument : reason for concern, leading to recommendation
3. Recommendation : statement of what ought or ought not to happen.
Thesis International Labour Organisation’s (ILO) major project is the reduction of child-labour. The use of child-labour in the manufacturing of products is very strong in East Asia. Children as young as six and seven work at jobs from 6.00 a.m. to 6.00 p.m. They work in conditions which are very unhealthy. They are just given one meal a day.
Argument ILO recognizes the fact that child labour has been around for al long time. In the UK, there used to be children of five and six years working in the cloth mills of Lancashire and in the coal mines. Employers found children less troublesome. They could also be paid less.
Argument Nowadays child labour is very common in Asia and Africa. In India and Afghanistan employers use child labour in the carpet and glass industries. They claim that young children have nimble fingers. They can do the job better than adults.
Argument Child labour is undesirable. Yet it seems to be necessary in low - income countries. Poverty often makes child labour necessary. Poor families need the money that their children earn.
Recommendation Schooling is necessary in the battle against child labour. One of the main problems with schooling is its cost. Parents have to find the money for school fees, uniforms, school books and pencils. Then there is the cost of transport to school. An ILO report in 1996 recommended that income of parents be raised. If they get a better income, these children would be sent to school. So the first priority should be to provide skills training for parents. Then they would be able to earn more and be able to send their children to school.
Adapted from: Informational English for Senior High School 

NEWS ITEM
Social function : To inform readers, listeners or viewer about the event of the day which are considered newsworthy or important.
Generic structure
1. Newsworthy event recounts the event in summary from.
2. Background event elaborate what happen, to whom, in what circumstances.
3. Source : comment by participant in, witnesses to and authorities expert on the event.
Indonesian Maid Beheaded
Newsworthy event An Indonesian housemaid has been executed in Saudi Arabia after being convicted of killing her employer, the Saudi Interior Minister said.
Background The woman was beheaded in the Southern Asia province in what was the second execution in the country.
The maid was earlier found of suffocating her female boss and stealing her sewellery. Rape, murder and other serious crimes can carry the death penalty in the conservative.
Source Last year, Saudi Arabia, which follow a strict interpretations of Syaria, Islamic Law executed more than 130 people. 

SPOOF
Generic structure
1. Orientation
2. Event : this is the sequence of event that can be more than one.
3. Twist : something that is fun.
Orientation Last week, I took my four - years old daughter, Sally to a children party. We traveled by train. Sally has never traveled by train before she sat near the window and asked a lot of questions.
Event 1 “Why are you doing that?” Sally asked. “To make my self beautiful, the lady answered. She put away her compact and smiled kindly. But you are still ugly “Sally said”
Event 2 Suddenly, a middle – aged lady came into our compartment and sat opposite to Sally.
“Hello little girl, she said. Sally didn’t answer, but looked at her curiously.”
Twist The lady took out her compact powder. She began to make up her face. 

PROCEDURE
Social function : To describe how something is accomplished through a sequence of actions or steps.
Generic structure
1. Goal
2. Material (not required for all procedural texts)
3. Steps 1 – n (goal followed by a series of steps oriented to achieving the goal)
How to cook Instant Noodle
Instant noodle can be cooked very simply by following these instructions:
Your will need one packed of instant noodle, 2 glass of water, a pan, a bowl.
Boil 2 glasses of water in a pan add noodle, stir slowly for 3 minutes. While the noodle is being cooked, put the seasoning and chili powder in a bowl. Pour the cooked noodle together with the soup in to the bowl. Mix well with all seasoning.
Spread delicious powder. The noodle is ready to be served.

COMMENTARY
Social function : To give comment about something.
Generic structure
1. General statement to position the reader or point of view about argument.
2. Sequenced explanation about argument.
3. Conclusion.
U.S. Job Market still in Low Gear
General statement to position the reader or point of view about argument The nonfarm payrolls report ushered in 2005 with a whimper. Only 146,000 jobs were created in January, well below expectations that straddled the 200,000 mark. What’s more, annual benchmark revisions reduced the tally of job creation over the previous three months by 59,000 positions. As a result, the overage six – month gain in payrolls now stands at 168,500, a sub – par performance for an economy that clocked in growth in excess of 4 percent in 2004, which would normally be consistent with average monthly increases in the 250,000 to 300,000 range. The bottom line is that irrespective of the strength in U.S. economic activity firms remain cautious in their hiring intentions.
And, it looks like this trickled down to a more discouraged worker in January, as a contraction in the labour force helped pull the unemployment rate down to 5,2 percent.
Sequenced explanation In spite of the disappointing headline in janyar, the details of the report imparted some good news. The service, side of the economy was the mainstay of job growth (+ 171,000 positions) and, equally important, the gains were evenly distributed among sectors. Education, transportation, leisure/hospitality, financial, and professional services each realized job gains in the 20,000 to 35,000 range. In contrast, goods producing sectors did not fare well, with a 25,000 reduction in manufacturing jobs accounting for the bulk of the weakness in January.
Conclusion Although we believe that U.S. economy will expand by 3.5 percent in 2005, we doubt corporate America will break from its cautious hiring intentions. We look for another 2 million new jobs this year, and while this would not be a bad outcome. It would not be a great one either for an above potential economic performance. That said, we doubt today’s report, or even a continuation of below – trend job growth in 2005, would alter the Fed’s desire to reduce the amount of monetary stimulus in the U.S. economy. However, it would lend itself to a continuation of measured rate likes and increase the possibility that the fed funds rate will remain below the 4 percent mark by year-end.
Adapted from: Informational English for Senior High School

Well, I hope we can learn about paragraph from this simple article